You know what I am going to say.... Too many objects! We are a very very busy server and these bases might work on servers who can expect 30-40 people at a time but here every little helps.
Now in the next arma patch there is something we can use to make these into map objects... however you still need to consider the as i call them "potatos" who go to or past these areas, Some people are running i3 processors which are 5-6 years old!
I would say tone down on the outside wall as a good starting place, maybe use a different wall type but other than that I can see an area here where some good roleplay can be had for your gang any anyone who comes to it.
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